Bleach - Hitsu Toushiro

[Shiro]

Hi guys im new to esforums and 3d art, a family member on these boards introduced me too both and ive been hooked to modeling objects, cging manga and looking at all the awesome art on these boards since. I decided to have the courage to try my first charcter model which also happens to be my favorite charcter from the anime Bleach, Hitsu***a.Please dont be to ruff on me and id be great if anyone could give me some constructive critz :yes: heres my first WIP so far O_O

Polycount is @ 521 triangles with a animatable mouth and eyes (hope i did them right)

 

[Cold Steel]

Isn't the hair supposed to be longer and more upwards ?

Looking good though.

 

[samurai^Kurai]

welcome to the forums man ;D. looks like a nice start, hes also one of my favs in bleach.
hair seems very secksy to me, keep it up ^_^

 

[victorESF]

i thnkhes to skinny

to skinny

 

[Almighty_Gir]

GI renders = lose when trying to crit.

wires please.

 

[Shiro]

wow thanx for all the comments so far guys and the warm welcome.

Cold Steel : Thanks man, and as for the hair it looks pretty accu to my ref from
the manga.

victorESF : thanx for the crit but could you show me pics to prove your post as
I dont want to go against my ref for just a opnion

Kurai : Thanx ^^

Mad_AxMan : here ya go hope this helps

all for now nice to meet ya all.

 

[PiXel]

lookin good pretty anime

gj!

 

[samurai^Kurai]

im not a modeler but it seems well build and clean to me. nice stuff

 

[Shiro]

been realy busy with school homework but heres a small update , still working on the neck flesh area so its looking a little weird but yea heres teh update, constructive c&c welcome

Edit : please note that he wears a sorta long jacket cape thing thats why i didnt put to much def into the higher/arm,shoulder,chest area as i will with the cape which is quite hard and soild, meeh hard to explain but you'll see

 

[PiXel]

Looks yummeehh and smooth!

get mark 1/a ;D

 

[samurai^Kurai]

very secksy.
i assume the length of the arms isnt final because they would be a bit too short then.
otherwise very nice model ^_^

 

[Shiro]

well yea they sorta final but there will still be 3/4 forearm and hands so it should be a proportinal size to the charcter and if not by the time its done i'll shorten or lengthen :fight:

 

[PiXel]

well yea they sorta final but there will still be 3/4 forearm

then i would suggest to make his body longer/taller because the anatomy would be wrong if i am right.

 

[Shiro]

well here ya go see if its to long for yourself ;P

 

[PiXel]

hmmm nah, its alright to me
could u please post wire?

 

[Adaptus]

Looks awesome so far, pretty accurate. :yes:

Keep it up.

 

[samurai^Kurai]

now he got hands :O
your doing a great job this far. very accurate. secksy stuff.
but yea a wire wouldnt harm anyone ;p

 

[Shiro]

Tada here the wires everyone

thanx for all the comments guys so far realy makeing me want to finish it faster and make it better ^^

 

[PiXel]

yeh nice mesh

GJ!

 

[Shiro]

Dam just finished the capatains jacket 2 before i have to goto school heres an update sorry i had to rush the render but enjoy i'll post wires this afternoon.