Bardock WIP

[Doormat]

Dunno what for is it, just felt like doing him ^^

Hair is a bish, but i think it went out pretty nicely.
still needs some work and some parts added.
Please crit..
p.s thanks Davidskiwan for a drawover he made earlier

 

[DJ-Ready]

I think you could add an extra row around his belly
and whats that spike on his croth

 

[LionHeart]

You got a pretty good polyflow there, keep it up!

 

[elcor]

at the moment has a look nice.good work.

 

[Barney]

From what I remember of seeing pics of Bardock, shouldn't his torso be bigger? The picture may have been at a weird angle, but I'm still pretty sure his torso should be a bit bigger. Other then that it looks pretty nice.

 

[KYnetiK]

Needs another row around his belly as DJ said, this will be necessary for articulating torso for animation. Also something doesnt seem right about the back of his calf and knees. Apart from these niggly bits its coming along quite nicely GJ ^_^

 

[Darth Revan]

Needs another row around his belly as DJ said, this will be necessary for articulating torso for animation. Also something doesnt seem right about the back of his calf and knees. Apart from these niggly bits its coming along quite nicely GJ ^_^

looks like his carfe muscle was carved but its a nice looking model; there

 

[Doormat]

About the belly.. i made my ginyu armor just like that and it deformed good but ok. i'll add a row on him

From what I remember of seeing pics of Bardock, shouldn't his torso be bigger? The picture may have been at a weird angle, but I'm still pretty sure his torso should be a bit bigger. Other then that it looks pretty nice.

i'll see what i can do, maybe i'll make it abit bigger
what exactly is wrong with the legs? maybe a lil drawover? =]
thank you guys for the comments! please carry on xD

 

[Darth Revan]

well here is a quick drawover maybe skiwan can do a fix if he see,s it
not my best draw over but you get the idea lol

 

[final shine]

the knee area is allways thiner than the calf an thigh area,
anyway you should trie scaleing down a bit the calf and foot in the side view

 

[Doormat]

fixed mostly all the stuff u guys mentioned.. thanx
started texturing..

 

[elcor]

fixed mostly all the stuff u guys mentioned.. thanx
started texturing..

nice texture at the moment.good job!:fight:

 

[Fusion]

You forgot that

 

[Darth Revan]

You forgot that

dont ya think he might have been adding that last

 

[PeXXeR]

will you realase him when done :}

 

[Doormat]

will you realase him when done :}

I think so
Btw madman is right

 

[KYnetiK]

Really awesome texture so far man, keep it up. Just dont get too carried away and forget the hands =þ

Careful not to make the boots and guantlets too much like vegeta and not bardock. Dont forget the cross shaped scar on his face either.

Are you planning on a scouter or thought about the transformation state?

ie

Normal state: with scouter, and without bandana,

Ascended state: with or without scouter, and with blood soaked bandana

...or perhaps a bruised and beaten version?

 

[Doormat]

Really awesome texture so far man, keep it up. Just dont get too carried away and forget the hands =þ

Careful not to make the boots and guantlets too much like vegeta and not bardock. Dont forget the cross shaped scar on his face either.

Are you planning on a scouter or thought about the transformation state?

ie

Normal state: with scouter, and without bandana,


Ascended state: with or without scouter, and with blood soaked bandana


...or perhaps a bruised and beaten version?

Thanx, and do'nt worry, the hands are already there xD and the scar will be there too i'm planning on a battle damaged version, but that depends on my free time..
anyway, gonna post some updates tommorow, so stay tuned
p.s. i can't see the last 2 images.. only the tripod amblem

 

[Ramunas]

Well, why are you doing so low poly stuff? Try doing a high poly models sometimes. The shoe doesn't look right. Maybe some polys there.

 

[Doormat]

Well, why are you doing so low poly stuff? Try doing a high poly models sometimes. The shoe doesn't look right. Maybe some polys there.

dunno, i just like saving polies, it's like a challenge to me ^^ with this bardock i kinda got out of my regular bounds, because the model has 2010polies
it would'nt be a prob for me to make a higher poly mesh, but i see no point.. i'm modelling for hl atm.
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