off topic:: just a tip, you should probably rehost the first image with your signature up there, for there are rippers out there.
on topic:: its very nice. yes it does suit with the song very well, and youre cool for listening to pennywise :] the only things i could say is, add some more definition and, even though this will require some erasing and what not and i doubt youll do it, i think it would better if the policeman's jacket would look more like a policeman's.