Another Riku WIP

[irishkidd16]

It's a heavy wip but i want crits early so i dont have to go back as much like i did with my sora model.
http://img10.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img10&image=ak4726ur.png
http://img10.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img10&image=esf1um.png
http://img10.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img10&image=m40sn.png
http://img10.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img10&image=m4a18yp.png

 

[g0jack]

I'm guessing he doesn't have feet yet? Looks ok but... make the top a little wider? What program are you using?

 

[PiXel]

Milkshape 3d he´s using..... i just wanna know the polycount... then i goona crit it.

 

[irishkidd16]

yes milkshape 3d, the poly count is around 1100 right now.

Which way do u want the top widened? from the side view or front, or all around?

 

[irishkidd16]

here's another update, still waiting for tryforces crits lol.
http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163&image=ak4725oi.png
http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163&image=esf2yy.png
http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163&image=m48ek.png
http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163&image=m4a12ev.png
http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163&image=milkshapemodel2dw.png

so please crit i really want this model to turn out good. btw its 2330 poly count
I'll have to clean it up later.
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(note they may look small i had to cut them down to fit on imageshack)

 

[Mr. Phonso]

well first you might want to connect those arms onto the body, and looks like you wasted some, if not many triangles. but youve got some flow going

 

[g0jack]

Widen the legs (baggy part) in sideview. Looks pretty good.

 

[Growler]

ohh... milkshape... bad memories... :/ Nice though, wierd pants, fix please

 

[Nuttzy]

Dan16, aside from yoru sigs rather obvious obscenity,its 88 pixels too tall and needs to be resized, unless youve made other arrangements with the forum staff that i dont know about

and irish, double posting is against the rules, if you have to update your model do so by editing it in to your previous post, not by making a new one,



now onto the model, so i dont look like a complete forum nazi lol

its very "primitive", if you catch what im saying, and way too many polys have been used for such small detail, no easy way to go about fixing it but your gonna need to kill alot of stacks and sides on those cylinders

 

[irishkidd16]

k sry bout double post, i am planning on going back in and cleaning it up because I know there is alot of wastage, either that or i make it more detailed and use those extra polies for something. Thanx for the crits keep them coming.