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This is my first *good* model. I've attempted modeling in the past with many failed results.. I like this one though. Crits and comments please. By the way, I am fully aware that it is too high poly, which shall be fixed later on..



Thanks David for the refs ;)
 
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lookin good so far man, but like i said... little high poly =P anyway, its going good so far, keep it up
 
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Thanks to Davidskiwan for the ref.
 
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oh right.. i forgot to say that.. I knew my post was missing something.. >_> *goes edit*
 
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I'd hit that >.>

Keep it up.
 
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Lookin' extremely accurate to the ref, good work. :3
 
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to me it looks like its not animatable properly
 
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with the amount of polys hes trhown in? it seems animatable to me..
FFX models have the same way for the shoulders on the model they just have allot of segments.
 
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Other file got corrupt so I remade it.. >_< (and I just found out that max creates auto backups.. *sigh*) Anyway, lower polycount (460 or something) and I made boots.



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Anyone know why the reference pic isn't as.. uh.. sharp as the first one? o_O
 
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yea dont know if it'll animate properly (parenthesis removed) >_<
 
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pretty good man, but maybe a bit too low poly at the front, for the boobs sake at least :(

oh and u might wanna attach the legs to the skirt :x
 
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Cmon guys post some crits for me.. >_< I need help.. *sigh*

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Face isn't detailed.. yet. o_O And I think I need to redo her breasts, though I have no idea how to do so. If anyone could help me.. I'd appreciate it, thanks. And I'll attach the legs to the skirt once I find out how to connect it.. >_<
 

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Since she's wearing a shirt I dont think there should be much of a 'indent' but instead just put a small crease between her breasts.
 
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I'll keep that in mind when I make her breasts.. again.

I couldn't help myself.. I had to re-remake her after watching the tut in poopinmymouth.. o_O anyhow I remade her for the 3rd time and I am NOT remaking her again.. I hope. :p



Not too sure if I wanna do her breasts though.. =/ The jacket would cover it up anyhow.. I guess I could give it another attempt though o.o C&C
 
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For some reason, i like the second one more :x

The last one looks really angular, which is the opposite of what a woman/girl should be.
 
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You should make one boob around 4000 polys. Nice annnnnnnd big :O

anyways, looks pretty good if you ask me. /me watches this thread
 
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@Kaination: lol :p
@Cold Steel: What do you mean angular? o_O

Also, I've been wondering, had I finish this model, would anyone care to skinmap/skin it for me? o_O
 

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