Android 17

[Zeroc Corez]

alright, so here is a render of the full model, the textures are pretty final, maybe I should lower the spec of the gun, what do you think?
http://puu.sh/dbm15/24459d91c9.jpg

 

[hleV]

The torso is good. Not sure about the gun, gotta check the manga to see if there are good shots of it.

 

[Zeroc Corez]

Thanx hlev

It does look better from what I see, but I can't judge the torso well without seeing the other parts.

You did one thing right that the other ESF modelers didn't: allowed feedback. Don't ruin this.

I thought that I was begining to be a pain in the ass, that is why I wanted to stop posting a picture every two minutes!

 

[hleV]

Now how about that hair thingy?
Also perhaps you could alter one of the pants' legs a bit to not look identical to the other?

 

[Zeroc Corez]

But I fixed the hair thingy :O
http://puu.sh/dbmCY/6ca0df4fcf.jpg

And the pants arent symetrical, they just look the same xD
No seriously, It would be a real pain in the ass to go back and edit the geometry, I would have to edit the all the textures too, and besides, the left one has that torn piece!

 

[hleV]

But I fixed the hair thingy :O

You didn't. It's not even close to how it looks on actual #17. Make it bigger in height.

 

[Zeroc Corez]

what are you refering to? You mean those white lines?

 

[hleV]

Make the gray part bigger. Check the reference pictures.

 

[Zeroc Corez]

Alright, I made it bigger!

 

[Zeroc Corez]

you can see it here if you want
http://zeroccorez.deviantart.com/art/Android-17-497508666

 

[hleV]

Alright check this out.

1. Adjusted the hair top (note that it doesn't have to be symmetrical on both sides)
2. Adjusted the gray part (like I said, it needed to be bigger. Have you even looked at the ref pics?)
3. Adjusted the small hair position (not sure if it's hard to do at this point)

 

[Zeroc Corez]

Nah, you're being too picky, it's fine as is.

 

[hleV]

If you're lazy, just say so, because it's not fine as is and you're just lying to yourself if you say it is. Your model has mistakes and I'm pointing them out to you because you're incapable of doing that yourself. Way to be an ass about it by saying I'm being picky just so you wouldn't need to work on it anymore.

I would've said nothing about the top of the hair if you haven't for absolutely no reason altered it since #101. The small hair is minor and you don't have to change it if it's too much trouble. The gray part? Make it look like actual #17's because at the moment it's not.

 

[Zeroc Corez]

It´s funny that you are saying I´m being lazy. If I was lazy, I wouldnt have bothered with making the model in the first place.
And besides, I think the model looks fine, and I will keep it like that! And hopefully one of the devs actually bother with answering me when I write to them on TS!

 

[Reading Rainbow]

you need to give 17 back pockets, otherwise he looks like a krokodil using lithuanian!

here are some pictures of his butt

http://i.ytimg.com/vi/Dm6GCulrPVE/hqdefault.jpg
http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb...es/6/64/Piccolo_vs_Android_17_Dragon_Soul.png

I was looking through some more random pictures and saw that on his handgun holster there is a latch that can go over the gun. I recommend making the gun darker or even black.

http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb..._17_putting_a_glock_to_the_old_man's_face.png
http://www.angelfire.com/dbz/DBZCelManiac/androids.jpeg

as far as what hlev is talking about the hair.

http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120526194740/dragonball/images/9/9f/Future17.Ep.194.png
https://c1.staticflickr.com/3/2452/4530888629_4ed4db3f8e.jpg

 

[hleV]

The model does look fine. It doesn't look like #17, though. Only resembles him. I've pointed out the differences between your model and how he looks in the manga. You are lazy in the sense that you can't be bothered to fix these things.
Also yeah, he needs back pockets. I didn't even check how he looks from the back because of the multiple mistakes in the front.

Why is his ass shiny? xD

 

[Zeroc Corez]

you need to give 17 back pockets, otherwise he looks like a krokodil using lithuanian!

I can´t, I made a couple but they look jagged up for some reason, I wanted to ask the devs about it since I couldnt find any good reason to why it does that, but they never answer!

The model does look fine. It doesn't look like #17, though. Only resembles him. I've pointed out the differences between your model and how he looks in the manga. You are lazy in the sense that you can't be bothered to fix these things

You are over exaggerating! I doesnt look that bad. Belive me, I want to make it look alot better, as much as you do, but for now, I dont have the time, AND every time I change it, you tell me that it doesnt look good. And besides, I dont like taking orders, well, what I mean is I like to make it my way. I shouldnt have made this thread in the first place xD

Why is his ass shiny? xD

Its jeans bruh!

 

[Ryokeen]

Pls define "they look jagged up" , might be able to help. And to be honest i think he looks pretty good. I wouldn't be so pick about his hairstyle, it's a manga and hair is different in allmost every scene

 

[Zeroc Corez]

Deffining jagged up
http://puu.sh/dbH6R/e458040bff.jpg

--- edit ---

This is how the texture should look

http://puu.sh/dbHe9/e2049340d2.jpg

It looks exactly like this when i make the pocket texture, as I said, I have no idea why...

 

[Dead Hunter]

I usually fix it by moving either UVW vertex by a little in any direction or moving vertex on model itself and then undo.

Problem is there because as you can see in your topology, that last poligon of shoe isnt reading correctly your uvw. So move any vertex in that area