Adult SSJGohan[blue suit]

[flickone]

i started this Gohan and i need your crits i still havnt connected allmos all the parts together,that i can edit it easier. This model is just for fun but crits would really help for some improvment.

 

[Orbit]

Nice! I love it, except the forehead seems to be too wide (maybe it's just me though) and the sideburns are too high IMO.
Btw, do you have a tutorial about making arm muscles like that?
Anyways GJ but looks very high-poly. Care to post some wires and the triangle count?

 

[SA_Gohan]

The proportions are off, most notably with the head. Because its so big, the model looks like Chibi Gohan, and the hands and shortness of the legs further enhance that effect.
Shrink the head, make the hands bigger and the legs longer and you'll have pretty solid model ^^

 

[IceX]

the head is to big for the body i think

 

[PiXel]

i agree with Sa_Gohan....

but gj on it.

 

[flickone]

-i made head smaller
-made hands bigger
-made legs longer
-dunno if the head is still too wide

Nice! I love it, except the forehead seems to be too wide (maybe it's just me though) and the sideburns are too high IMO.
Btw, do you have a tutorial about making arm muscles like that?
Anyways GJ but looks very high-poly. Care to post some wires and the triangle count

About tutorial of these arms i was searching too but what you can do is make GIRS tutorial with arms and ref by David than just found some good dbz arms shots and match the propotions.

The proportions are off, most notably with the head. Because its so big, the model looks like Chibi Gohan, and the hands and shortness of the legs further enhance that effect.
Shrink the head, make the hands bigger and the legs longer and you'll have pretty solid model ^^

Thx these crits really helped me

the head is to big for the body i think

Hope i fixed it enough

Keep criting



here are some more shots ...

well trianglecount is 3115, polygon count is 1922

 

[ShadyD]

Yeah that definatly did the trick.. Looks good now

 

[IceX]

yeah its nice i like ur poly flow

 

[Super Veggeto]

yeah its nice i like ur poly flow

Polyflow is shown with flats or wires ^_^"

mind you post some?

also, the side view of the head looks a little wierd, i might do a drawover later if im not too lazy cause i just woke up XD

but anyway, the rest looks good, you have been improving. =]

 

[flickone]

hey thx good to hear that

about wire ill post it latter but heres flatshade.

and if you gonna make me a draw heres a close pic of the side.

i make this model just for fun so i dont mind how many polys its going to have.

 

[Ravven]

Nice Gohan man!!! Awersome job! Could you post wires??

2 advices:
- make chin a little longer from part with mouth
- make waist a moe thin

or just fallow my crapy drawovers

P.S. It's my first drawover and it has been done in paint, so dont expect too much

 

[041leo041]

pic to help out

 

[flickone]

As i said i will post wires latter.

iam not very sure about the chin i tryed to match the head to many pics. But i think this one is the best i found.

-but i i think you were right with moving mouth abit
-and i made waist a bit thinner
-and tryed to fix the side of the head

 

[CrackerJack]

Some flat-shades would be much appretiated

 

[ShadyD]

hey thx good to hear that

about wire ill post it latter but heres flatshade.

and if you gonna make me a draw heres a close pic of the side.

i make this model just for fun so i dont mind how many polys its going to have.

he already posted.. it was hard to see though cuz of the lighting..

 

[davidhalo]

Some wireframes would be great. Looks good so far. Gotta work on that neck and holding the verts together.

 

[Ravven]

It's much better now!! It's comming along great!

SV - Could you delete some of yours p.m. ? Got a question to ask

 

[DustMan2704]

my social day today....
maybe this will help ya

http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/image/kleurboek-dbz-kl-01.gif
http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/image/kleurboek-dbz-kl-04.gif

well this is mystic gohan,but if it helps...

http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/image/kleurboek5-dbz-kl-01.gif
http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/image/kleurboek5-dbz-kl-03.gif
http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/image/kleurboek5-dbz-kl-15.gif

could be a good reference if it wasnt a connect-the-points drawing thingy >.<
http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/image/kleurboek5-dbz-kl-12.gif

 

[ShadyD]

2 words
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[DustMan2704]

403 Error

works fine for me,maybe you should stop dling so much p0rn,for a better connection...

anyway, now go there manually...

http://www.dragonball-paradijs.com/kleurplaten/kleurplaten.php

its a site form netherland.
if its not working,remember its all ShadyD´s fault!