Acoustic guitar Intro

[Painkiller]

[video=youtube;INu212b3xpY]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=INu212b3xpY[/video]
I recorded this yesterday. Tell me wut you think

 

[Lanceo9]

Nice

That sounds very nice, and clean. What software / recording tools did you use?

 

[Painkiller]

Adobe Audition

 

[Brosiris]

Are you using a pick? If so I'd suggest using your fingers for a softer tone, and I feel like there are parts that could flow better, but aside from that it's nice.

I'm trying to figure out a way to turn "flow better" into a constructive critisism, and i'm having a hard time doing so. What I mean is like, the note should either be higher or lower, depending on where it could flow better, do you have the music sheet for it, so I can duplicate your playing?