Dragon Ball F

[hleV]

Chapter 5.

 

[Z Power]

A bit too crass, but I enjoyed it.

 

[Shaladanra]

Funny as hell ^^

 

[hleV]

A bit too crass, but I enjoyed it.

What do you mean by crass (that's a new word to me)? Stupid/rough or what?

 

[Z Power]

Crass
1. Without refinement, delicacy, or sensitivity; gross; obtuse; stupid: crass commercialism; a crass misrepresentation of the facts.

Basically all the talk about Bulma.

Also, moar trolz gohan pl0x.

 

[Denz]

its fine as it is man, keep it coo

 

[Deathshot]

Hahahaha Oh man I love these.

 

[phrack50]

What do you mean by crass (that's a new word to me)? Stupid/rough or what?

He means you use the F word way too much. It's funny stuff, but tone it down a bit.

 

[hleV]

Chapter 6.

 

[Baltzatu]

Lol...Nice saga, hleV. :laff:

 

[Reptile]

nice story dude. but whats releaf? (06,79)

 

[hleV]

Typo for relief.

 

[Z Power]

Hah Hah, Gohan makes me laugh so much. It feels a bit discontinuous with the previous saga, but overall I love it.

 

[Denz]

nice nice haha, I love it

Next time add an arrow to the first page, so that we know how to read it. I can't remember every time mayne

 

[hleV]

Next time add an arrow to the first page, so that we know how to read it. I can't remember every time mayne

I did that in the main DBF thread on Daizenshuu EX forums. Didn't really care to do that here.

 

[Denz]

you *******!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[hleV]

For those who thought that DBF was bad: http://daizex.fanboyreview.net/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=18890.

 

[Z Power]

That is so messed up. Compared to that, yours is million times better.

 

[hleV]

Chapter 7. Almost done with the god damn Freeza arc.

 

[Deathshot]

I just noticed how Goku looks a lot more.... ferocious and fierce in the manga in SSJ.



Still funny as hell as usual hleV. Keep up the good work.