VideoJinx test model in progress

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Just curious tho, did you draw that ?


Also thanks for that short film, I always enjoy watching those kind of short films.
nah, its up on esf world for quite some time, i knew it was thre and i knew its gona help ya ;)

than u should go to http://www.aniboom.com/ , they have a lot of cool stuff ;) (u may need to serch for them)

i sugest u make a new head model, it will help u understand the proportions better rather than just fixing the curent model ;)
 
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I added some eye brow definition, changed the color to a brighter one for Kam, and I touched up the Jaw even more..

Its getting their ;D any crits?
 
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Looks much better than the original.
 
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I added some eye brow definition, changed the color to a brighter one for Kam, and I touched up the Jaw even more..

Its getting their ;D any crits?
I meant the background color. Fix the nose segment already >.<
 
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Whaaat!?! a transformations o_O?!?!

Crits anyone? :D

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moved the eys back to norm posiion.
 
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it looks great ^^,but fix that nose, u made it to wide ;)
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now i see its mising something important, arent u gona add him ears? o_O
 
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Massive neck needs to go. Even for an apparently bulgy character it's too thick.



Edit: actually the way I drew it it's still too thick. More neck needs to be removed at the front additionally.

Edit 2: Something wrong about the eyes (from front view). Either they are too small, or the face is too wide.
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Something like this if you're going for a human:



Your guy looks like a mutant, which isn't a bad thing. If that's what you're going for and you intend to give him a huge muscular body, I think the head is fine. I'd also leave the eyes white in that case.

The eyes are a little too close together though.
 
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Well, from what I understand, Jinx is aiming for a buffed up super-being type guy, like something you'd see in DC Comic.
 
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Well, from what I understand, Jinx is aiming for a buffed up super-being type guy, like something you'd see in Marvel Comics because DC is crap.

Even if he is, the neck was waaaay too thick in the side view. He needs to trim off some of that, and trim off some of the neck in the front.
 
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I tweaked the face ait more :D

And now I'm workin my way down to the Kneck and shoulder areas

Check my first post for new updates

Nix kinda has a point tho ^_^

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Looking better now, But IMO the neck is still too massive.
The front part is good, just at the back it looks too thick. But if you want him to be really muscular, it's ok I guess.
 
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Since he posted pictures from WWH, I'm assuming he wants that kind of a character, in which case it looks fine.
 
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Just updated the neck area,

I think the neck area will look better once he gets some ears ^_^


If not then more shaping~! and Tweaking!~
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:paper:More body progress :cool:, and neck tweaking!!

:notice:Crits as usually are open!~
 
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Alright I just attached the Arms, now I gotta shape them up =]

It sucks tho, i had finished his backside and saved over it =[ oh wells ill try again !~~

crits are open as usual
 

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