Carnage

[Damaera]

C&C?

 

[MF29]

I think that the render blends in too much into the background, I don't feel the two texts much either, you should choose one or the other I suppose.

 

[Damaera]

I wasn't really too happy with my first render, I'm kind of happy with my second, I did some slight changes.

What about now?

 

[MF29]

I think the first one looks a tad better, the second one is a little darker.

What I don't like mainly about it is that is looks a bit crammed in some areas with certain brushes.

 

[AmoN]

in the second one u cleared the problems of the 1st one.. (the red in the top left) but you also created new problems.. (the triple layer of the renders doesnt seem right.. and the background got too messy + the text got worse.)
try to make one that takes the positive things from the 1st and the 2nd together.