A work in progress

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Tyrande Whisperwind

http://i.imgur.com/aC5D59v.png?1?8322

 

[Horatio]

Looks really great; better than your last ones, too.

The only thing is, I don't know about the tilt of the mouth, seems a little tipped. Also, the ear in the background looks a little non-present, so you should bring it forward a bit.

But that's the only quarrel I have, so I'm happy!

 

[Critical_Error]

hehe thanks yea you are right I do not like the mouth either and w0w nice call on the ear I completely missed that.. x

 

[Zeonix]

Design of the left eye isnt consistent with the right, and its a tad too small, even if it is a 3/4 view. It'll probably look better in color, but the ear facing you looks like its angled a little too far from the side of the head.

 

[Critical_Error]

Definitely diomedes; but after spending like an hour working on that left eye I decided to leave it so I can clean it up with shading and color. Thanks for the feedback

 

[Shadi]

I agree with the eyes, everything else is beautiful (I don't know how the original one looks like, though)

 

[Critical_Error]

thank you shadi. this is my first attempt to draw something on the PC and it took me 12 hours just to do that lol. Currently coloring it ~

 

[RobiZ]

This is not much important ,but the line on the left side where arm splits from body, should be a little more to the bottom right or somehow diferent. It's not that much important ,but i think it would look better.

 

[Critical_Error]

yes I concur I just chucked that random line in their so I wouldnt forget where it should start. appreciate the comment sir