poems

Game: Create a song about peaches. However you can only do one phrase / line at a time. The lyrics must be original and not from a famous artist/band. I'll start you off: Peaches are sweet

..:: Death Breeds ::.. You think you know me, You want to know me, All you do is destroy me, Inside and out. What did I do to deserve this? Maybe I am falling in the abyss.. Why am I gloomy? Did I deserve to be lonely? What did you do to eat me alive? Maybe you decided to be rich with...

Hopeless Dreams I don't think I posted it here... I'm not really looking for a lot of critiques on how to improve it, but rather comments just on what you think about it.