Uzumaki Naruto

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Decided to model and later texture something diferent.


Now I don't know to much about this show but here something I put together in a few hours. Maybe you guys can help with your crits.



and some wireframes:



The skin will come next which will be semi-real style
 
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nice, though you need to edit the polygons in the perspective view, they make it look like has water in his mouth. Fatty Cheecks.
 
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Dude, I have one thing to say. You should go model for NNC! Their next version will need a modeler like you. I'm serious.
 
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The ring of the throwing knives is to big. It has to be small enough to fir exacly 1 finger in. Not bigger ^^

Nice model though :p
 
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Thanks guys

fixed the kunai weapon


and started the skin



still a big wip but hope to finish tomorrow if I have time
 
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cool stuf, but seem like he doesnt know where to look.... his eyes look like: <_> then >_<

xD funny look, nice improvments! gj!
 
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skin looks realy cool,i wub that reflective thing on hes bandana. but the face laks some proportions,
: P the eyes are placed a bit wrong. Im to tired to make a dravover now, but i realy like how its turning up.
paste some naruto front pics on the rendered model to remove the propotion issues
 
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I really like the face alot, but the face would look even better if his eyes were bigger.
 
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nice work, but still needs some tweaks:
1. look at that pointy 'thing' in from on his pants :p u gotta fix that!
2. his sleeves in front view must be bigger, cuz narutos clothes were more baggy
3. his pants ar too big :p u gota scale them a lil
4. Now look at his torso! He looks like he is fat! But he's not! Naruto is slim and u made him look fat :p There is a slighty difrence in fat and buggy clothes, just rotate your model and look at lower torso and you'll get what im talking about!
5. U gotta to fix the chubby face! He's cheeks are too fat! :p
6. Fix the eyes, right now he looks like a retard :p it's like pixel said yours looks like that <_> while he's supposed to look like that >_<

Well thats all i found now, I rly luv the skinning style :D nad that reflect on protector just rox ! :p Good luck
 
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Fixed the face:


and the pants, also scale it a bit down from the side to look a bit more thick, will let the skin do the rest


if there aren't any other major crits will start with the rest


P.S happy new year
 
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The hair looks really static and uniform, and his jacket collar isn't thick enough, but the texturing and lighting on that face is really awesome.
 
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his collar is some kind of white fur so it got to be bigger^^
 
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The headband texture looks excellent. The model's proportions are also pretty accurate. Great job, Goku.
 
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Some refs, and it looks like you used one of Insanes work and attached the texture to the model. The metal piece is really familiar. >_>
 
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Hey dude I got an idea! Maybe once you're done with this you can make a trans for it that looks like Kyuubi Naruto. That would really rock.
 
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Some refs, and it looks like you used one of Insanes work and attached the texture to the model. The metal piece is really familiar. >_>
sry, but your acusing him of something? +_-

anyway man, follow my drav over a bit more : D !!!

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skip that with the nose , i see you already fixored that

and i think you should definetly keep the eybrows straight! they look funny rounded like that in the end : P !
 
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nice one :) keep it up like this and it will be great model :DDDDD
 
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just one thing i noticed! His kunai must fit in that 'pocket' on his leg, cuz kunai by default are put into it and that pocket is closed :p! Yours kunais stick out! Change that! ;)
 

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