Vaan

Please critique.

Pink's definetely not Vaan's color >_> Try Penelo or atleast Fran.

Please critique the signature, don't post something useless, it's a brief act of disrespect in a way. I posted something useful in your thread and I feel that you should do the same in mine.

And saying that pink clashes with the actual render is disrespectful in what way?

And you should make the render more smooth. And you should tinker with the colors, cuz right now i don't feel them come together.

Ermmm mf. Saying that pink doesn't mix up nicely with the stock is a crit. And it is in no way disrespectful. And I have to agree with Jakut, the color doesn't look nice at all with Vaan.

My apologies, I misunderstood.

the render also looks a bit low quality in some way...you can see a lot of jaggies that doesn't make the sig flow the way it should.

i like the effects alot tho.. the colours seem right at 1st sight.. but im colour blind so its not for me to judge if the colours are right..