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My friends told me to redo this artwork of mediocrity, so I did last night.

I know this render is overused, so it's probably not anything you haven't seen before, but here is the redo.





Here's one I did months ago, back when I didn't hold shift while resizing renders:



Tell me what you think about them please.

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the third one is my favorite.

anyways,

The first one is maybe too 'huey'. 7/10

2nd one is also cool, tho it's only b&w. 9/10
3rd is the favorite what i already told, color fits nicely and all. 10/10
About that fourth.. The render looks stretched, however, you inserted in some cool brushes. 8/10
 
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Thank you for the comments, but 2 posts aren't going to do the trick, I need more feedback.
 
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3rd one is the best...coloring is perfect the 1st one i don't like too much it doesn't have any emotion in it really and the second one also is like that b/c it's just plain b/w...don't really like the circle things.
 
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1st one is the best:)
this is a very whored stock indeed but the 1st sig pwns them all.. i dont like the circles and you should sharpen some parts as well.
 
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I blurred the background for depth. Notice how the focal point looks closer to the "camera", and the objects behind him are out of focus.
 
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i know.. i didnt tell you to sharpen the blured parts but some parts that are in the front.. make them more sharper :)
 

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