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The left one of the collab looks the best of them all. The only thing bothering me is the text.. it seems like someone just put it on there just for the sake of having text on there. The top ones, in my opinion, have too much unused space on the top left and top right of them. The yellowish colour looks too dirty for me as well. The right collab, it's better than the top ones because of it's darkness. With a darker sig you don't have to worry as much about empty spaces as you would with lighter sigs. On darker ones you can emphasize the focal point more, which is exactly what's going on here. The only two minor crits I have is it's sharpness; it could do with a bit less of it. And two, and I mean this as constructive as humanly possible, you need to work on your text, man. Both on it's appearance and it's placement. It would probably be better off if it were on the right, on some of the unused space, and preferably a bit bigger than it is now. Hope I've helped.
 

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