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Hmm.. the effects work pretty well but it's really sharp. The text also doesn't really fit, and it needs a border. Just make it a little less sharp and you have a winner. Really good job.

Thanks, and I forgot the border. :x

Wow, it's awesome, but doesn't have borders. Maybe the Lensflare effect is a bit odd, but it's ok. 8/10

LegendarY said:

Wow, it's awesome, but doesn't have borders. Maybe the Lensflare effect is a bit odd, but it's ok. 8/10

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It isn't a lens flare.

It's a 200 px white soft brush, over an all black color dodged layer.

ah well, atleast it looked like one..

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It's really good. The top left looks a little plain but not really. I like the render and the BG a lot. 10/10
(I wish I could make BG's)

Other than the text it looks prtty cool dude. A bit too bright towards the top though.

I don't know what everyone else is talking about. The text looks great. Everything comes together very nicely. This is one to be proud of. Although, as stated, you should probably add a border...

Here's another one I did awhile ago.



Basically the same concept.

Do you mind showing the original render?

I just want to see something.

No



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that one is much better. though i think the text is too simple, it could have been better if it would have been transparent, i don't know. 9/10