alright, if you build upon previous works, just say its an updated version, i know you said that, but make it a little bit more clear. I was confused for a sec..
It's "ok", again, try to get a new font, I know you like it and all, but there ARE other fonts that look good and are grungy. Thats like my biggest gripe. I like refreshing looks, not the same font used in the last.....3-4 sigs you have made. Plus, they are all in the same position.
If you like, I can help you out with grunge, its my medium and I am a fan of grunge sigs. So I enjoy ALL grunge sigs, good or bad. Because at least it's something I am used to and can crit well on.
I hope this helps some. Remember I am not trying to be rude, so don't perceive it that way please
I'm a harsh sig crit'er..