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Alright ya'll, this is my first fan fic. I'm doing this cause I'm bored. If ya like it and want me to continue, post here.
Crits needed XD.
Sorry for any spelling errors.
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Chapter 1- The Return
"I told you Kakarott, you can't beat me at your current level. Although I'll give you credit for trying, you and that foolish Namek can never hope to defeat me." Raditz bellowed. "You should have joined me Kakarott, and helped me take over this planet. Now, your going to die."
Just then an explosion was heard, and Goku's young son Gohan, destroyed Raditz's space pod and was flying at an incredible speed. His target, Raditz. "No, this can't be true. My scouter was correct after all. This kid is strong." Raditz thought to himself as Gohan plowed into him headfirst.
"G-Go-Gohan!!" Goku screamed as he saw Gohan nail Raditz. Goku tried to get up, but he couldn't. Raditz had crushed his rib-cage, making it near impossible for Goku to breathe let alone stand. "GOKU!!" Piccolo yelled "Stand up Goku and help Gohan." Just then Gohan was struck down, his power level returning to normal.
"Damn brat" Raditz said "He actually cracked my armor. Oh well, that just means I'll have to kill him along with is wimp of a father. SAY GOODBYE YOU ANNOYING BRAT!!!" But before Raditz could deal the final blow, he felt something tug his tail and then, he lost his power.
Infurriated that someone found his weakspot, Raditz turned his head to see his own brother holding his tail. "Just as I thought, your're the same as me" Goku said breathelessly, "You loose all your power when someone grabs your tail. This fight is in my favor now......PICCOLO!!!!" He yelled "Lets do this."
Piccolo was emmiting an extreme amount of energy. With two fingers against his forhead Piccolo was charging up one big attack. "Keep holding him Goku, this will take some time." "No Kakarott, please.....let me go. I'll become good....please don't kill me." Raditz pleaded. Hearing all this was causing Goku to had second thoughts. "NO GOKU, DON'T LISTEN TO HIM!!!!" Piccolo screamed. But it was too late....Goku let go.
"You damn fool" Raditz guffawed, "Your to softhearted to be a Sayian. Now Kakarott, meet your doom."
Just as Raditz was about to deal the final blow, a blast of energy came out of nowhere and struck the ground next to where they were fighting. "What, who's their??!!" Raditz said. Piccolo was wondering the same thing.
Just then a figure appeared in the sky, and when Raditz saw him he fell to his knees, a look of fear in his eye's. Raditz couldn't beleave the power reading on his scouter. Right as Raditz began to speak his scouter exploded, the last numbers he saw on it were 30,000.
Piccolo stood in shock and disbeleaf "This can't be..." he thought "There.....there are two Goku's?"
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Next chapter- His name is Bardock.
Crits needed XD.
Sorry for any spelling errors.
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Chapter 1- The Return
"I told you Kakarott, you can't beat me at your current level. Although I'll give you credit for trying, you and that foolish Namek can never hope to defeat me." Raditz bellowed. "You should have joined me Kakarott, and helped me take over this planet. Now, your going to die."
Just then an explosion was heard, and Goku's young son Gohan, destroyed Raditz's space pod and was flying at an incredible speed. His target, Raditz. "No, this can't be true. My scouter was correct after all. This kid is strong." Raditz thought to himself as Gohan plowed into him headfirst.
"G-Go-Gohan!!" Goku screamed as he saw Gohan nail Raditz. Goku tried to get up, but he couldn't. Raditz had crushed his rib-cage, making it near impossible for Goku to breathe let alone stand. "GOKU!!" Piccolo yelled "Stand up Goku and help Gohan." Just then Gohan was struck down, his power level returning to normal.
"Damn brat" Raditz said "He actually cracked my armor. Oh well, that just means I'll have to kill him along with is wimp of a father. SAY GOODBYE YOU ANNOYING BRAT!!!" But before Raditz could deal the final blow, he felt something tug his tail and then, he lost his power.
Infurriated that someone found his weakspot, Raditz turned his head to see his own brother holding his tail. "Just as I thought, your're the same as me" Goku said breathelessly, "You loose all your power when someone grabs your tail. This fight is in my favor now......PICCOLO!!!!" He yelled "Lets do this."
Piccolo was emmiting an extreme amount of energy. With two fingers against his forhead Piccolo was charging up one big attack. "Keep holding him Goku, this will take some time." "No Kakarott, please.....let me go. I'll become good....please don't kill me." Raditz pleaded. Hearing all this was causing Goku to had second thoughts. "NO GOKU, DON'T LISTEN TO HIM!!!!" Piccolo screamed. But it was too late....Goku let go.
"You damn fool" Raditz guffawed, "Your to softhearted to be a Sayian. Now Kakarott, meet your doom."
Just as Raditz was about to deal the final blow, a blast of energy came out of nowhere and struck the ground next to where they were fighting. "What, who's their??!!" Raditz said. Piccolo was wondering the same thing.
Just then a figure appeared in the sky, and when Raditz saw him he fell to his knees, a look of fear in his eye's. Raditz couldn't beleave the power reading on his scouter. Right as Raditz began to speak his scouter exploded, the last numbers he saw on it were 30,000.
Piccolo stood in shock and disbeleaf "This can't be..." he thought "There.....there are two Goku's?"
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Next chapter- His name is Bardock.