My ESF Review.

I Decided To Put A ESF Review On My Site.
I Didn't Go Into Alot Of Detail And Put Alot
Of Links To The Manual, File Page ect.

Just Tell Me What You Think.
CLICK HERE

Well one things for sure I Think your Site is Pretty Good I like it alot, and the review is pretty cool as well well ^_^

lol well im very proud of my site.
yeah but ive added another game review.

the review isnt designed to tell the reader every little detail.
its a simple outline that gets the reader drooling, then it directs
them to links on where they can get the game or find more info
on it.

yeah so im looking for more comments ^_^

That is really not a review of the game... more like a bio of it. Reviews are usually.. longer and contain your thoughs about the game and not just its stats.

i supoce.
but like i said its more of a "outline" ;D

^_^

You never said that.. one of your sub topics is Main Outline but that's all there is.. this really isn't a review.. and doesn't really explain much about the gameplay or how it really handles. Not worth reading really...

thats not even an outline

its so short an undetailed u could pass it off as an excuse to make people go to ur site


if u wanna make it a real review ud need to actualy comment on things that matter like controls, sound, gameplay, graphics and so on

i bet u didnt even read it u just looked at the comments already given and went "nup"

my game reviews are designed to give people who have never played b4 a outline.

im not gonna say it again...ffs

they are just saying what they think, which is what you asked for, i think its ok but you need to, as most people have said, add alot more detail to it

omg... do I really have to be the one to tell this guy??? starting every word with a capital is soooo 2003... to be hip nowadays you should stop using capitals altogether and end all your sentences with at least 3 dots...

Super Charger said:

i bet u didnt even read it u just looked at the comments already given and went "nup"

my game reviews are designed to give people who have never played b4 a outline.

im not gonna say it again...ffs

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well if i never played it before that "review" sertainly isnt gonna make me want to play it if u cant even say how good the effects are

infact that review is more likely to make me go "hmm this doesnt help" *goes to a better site*

I agree with everyone else. It needs more detail. Also, I don't like the way it's set out, I think it should be a continuous piece of writing split into paragraphs rather than sub headings and then screenshots and useful links should go at the end.

Good Job
I like your site its now in my favourites
Ummmm you know that you can play lan games against bots right
cause if your a dial-up user like meh Lan is a GOOD THING
Well Done