banner that i made

i made banner from this because original text i came up was a bit foolish

banner
and

original

hmmm its alright i guess, but it feels empty (especially that white part).. and i think its a little harsh on the contrast.. i think you should try and involve your pic a little more with the banner, bcos it took me a while to realise it was actually their.. on a good note i can see quite a developing artist from you

I do agree. IT is especially bright and you need to tone it down a bit. Also that brush, looks like a techy brush you used their doesn't fit and it just gets in the way.

looks cool, what font is that?

wogasm.. yep i know.. the font of that banner doesn't fit with the pic
althou in that other pic it fits.. but if i add that other font it wont look like "banner" if u know what i mean.. and other thing is that text should be midle of the pic not right side.. it looks really stupid on right side..

the font is called "BTSE + PS2 FONT"
and the other is Angry Blue
u can dload it from dafont

Well.. first off it doesnt look like a banner, it looks like a signature. Poor Sasuke looks like hes getting eaten by red brushes, the white on the right is too light and random. (lol) Also that motion blue disturbs me a bit... and the font, yea ask LS for some advice