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This is a story im working on, i started it today, and im tired of typing right now, but it will be book lenght, lol. C&C PLEASE. Thank you in advance.
âTechnology of The Futureâ
By: David Perault
December 16, 2204 - This is regarding 2004, I am asking permission from you, counselor, to send a message back into the past to 2004, What the message is, is classified. I can not give any further details on this subject, but I need your approval. Please reply with haste.
Signed,
Rapid Core INC.
The year is 2204, Since 2010, a company named Rapid Core was started and slowly started to kill what you knew as Earth, which is now known as Rapid 1#. Since 2015, technology has jumped severely. In 2004 a low level company man that used to work at a company named, âSoft Microâ that specialized in the technology of robotics, told his ideas to a man named Gill Bates. His ideas were taken into serious consideration. Later, 2010, The company he had been promised had been started with the help and partnership of Gill Bates. The idea that this anonymous man, who later became known as Mr. Rapid, was to create an artificial world made of material that the world was running out of through Carbon Dioxide, and Water. Gill Bates took this opportunity as a way to become further known in the world. Mr. Rapidâs ideas were ingenious, This was a way for the world to live again, to live longer, never having to worry about hunger, nor lack of resources of any kind. But, what they didnât know is that creating these artificial planets would ruin the Orbit of the Earth and all of the other planets. Thinking out every possible flaw that they could see, the plans were put into place. In 2016, The ideas of Mr. Rapid and Gill Bates Robotics came together, starting the first ever artificial planet only 1 million miles away from Earth. The planet was to be a replica of Earth. and to be known as âEarth Rebornâ. Planet Earth Reborn would not have luscious valleys of green, nor Mountain tops that touched the sky. Instead it would have wastelands of robotics working Day and Night to produce our materials that we âHumansâ needed. The skyâs were to be clouded and dark all of the time. Never to see light. Seeing that this pollution would Create this âdarknessâ Lights were planted all over this world. Not a single human being would be able to inhabit this planet. This planet was to create four main resources. Gas, Oil, Water and Metal. Seeing that This planet could only hold 4 main resources, they didnât expect having to make a second planet. Seeing that they had too, After completing the first Planet in 2025, and how technology had increased deeply, They decided to make a second planet in half of the time providing Food and also allowing Companies around the world to start small warehouses on the second planet. Space travel had increased severely by 2013, allowing the building of The planet to be produced faster. By the time of 2022, Space travel was commonly used. People on Earth had small, Car like, ships. The furthest that they had advanced in settlement was to the moon, Although Mars was being examined for settlement.
âTechnology of The Futureâ
By: David Perault
December 16, 2204 - This is regarding 2004, I am asking permission from you, counselor, to send a message back into the past to 2004, What the message is, is classified. I can not give any further details on this subject, but I need your approval. Please reply with haste.
Signed,
Rapid Core INC.
The year is 2204, Since 2010, a company named Rapid Core was started and slowly started to kill what you knew as Earth, which is now known as Rapid 1#. Since 2015, technology has jumped severely. In 2004 a low level company man that used to work at a company named, âSoft Microâ that specialized in the technology of robotics, told his ideas to a man named Gill Bates. His ideas were taken into serious consideration. Later, 2010, The company he had been promised had been started with the help and partnership of Gill Bates. The idea that this anonymous man, who later became known as Mr. Rapid, was to create an artificial world made of material that the world was running out of through Carbon Dioxide, and Water. Gill Bates took this opportunity as a way to become further known in the world. Mr. Rapidâs ideas were ingenious, This was a way for the world to live again, to live longer, never having to worry about hunger, nor lack of resources of any kind. But, what they didnât know is that creating these artificial planets would ruin the Orbit of the Earth and all of the other planets. Thinking out every possible flaw that they could see, the plans were put into place. In 2016, The ideas of Mr. Rapid and Gill Bates Robotics came together, starting the first ever artificial planet only 1 million miles away from Earth. The planet was to be a replica of Earth. and to be known as âEarth Rebornâ. Planet Earth Reborn would not have luscious valleys of green, nor Mountain tops that touched the sky. Instead it would have wastelands of robotics working Day and Night to produce our materials that we âHumansâ needed. The skyâs were to be clouded and dark all of the time. Never to see light. Seeing that this pollution would Create this âdarknessâ Lights were planted all over this world. Not a single human being would be able to inhabit this planet. This planet was to create four main resources. Gas, Oil, Water and Metal. Seeing that This planet could only hold 4 main resources, they didnât expect having to make a second planet. Seeing that they had too, After completing the first Planet in 2025, and how technology had increased deeply, They decided to make a second planet in half of the time providing Food and also allowing Companies around the world to start small warehouses on the second planet. Space travel had increased severely by 2013, allowing the building of The planet to be produced faster. By the time of 2022, Space travel was commonly used. People on Earth had small, Car like, ships. The furthest that they had advanced in settlement was to the moon, Although Mars was being examined for settlement.
