My New AV

well here it is tell me what you think i gave it a hiphop meets esf look, background picture is dipset or also known as diplomats

I'm a fan of Cam'Ron, Juelz Santana, and Jim Jones... so this avatar's theme is cool with me. But, the actual techniques used are what I strongly disagree with. First and foremost, the fact you can't really see who is who, or basically, what is going on, because you decided to make it a white and gray blob. Secondly, the font layout could use some tweaking, especially in the "True Warriors" area. Lastly, I suggest leaving the image as you found it, and find colorful text that would be easily seen over it.

well i try to give that we are hard to see thing but i'll retweak everything right now and add make it better. Just give me 10 mins