Dude... What..? Seven years for that piece of crap? an 8 year old could come up with better in 30 minutes... That just makes me think you're an even bigger loser than originally thought... Damn dude get out some more this is terrible.
It's ****ing terrible it makes little to no sense at all, way too short to be a good fan fic and the grammar is so ****ing bad.
I suggest you try again and this time pull your head out of your ass.
Or an even better suggestion never try again cause reading this a second time really made me...
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